Tall as a fortress
Chaos overcomes the sea
Peace now forgotten
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Love this – the imagery is really strong in this one. Reminded me of an ancient legend, stuff that sailors would talk about during their voyages.
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Ahhh…thank you! Do you think I should re-word the last line? Or did you know what I meant there?
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I thought it was pretty clear! I get why you would want to re-word it though, but the 5 syllable thing does make it a bit tricky… but yeah, I think there’s nothing inherently wrong with it as it is 🙂
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Thanks! How about if I changed it to “peace now forgotten”. That may be better?
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Yes I think that definitely sounds better!
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Thank you for your help 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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This haiku is AWESOME. Man, this sounds so sailor-ish and stuff, but I love it! 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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As a former sailor who spent 5 and a half years in the Navy, I LOVE this! 🙂
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Wow! Thank you so much! 🙂
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